Hello bloggers,
this is my first time doing a story time and I am going to be about my Pets I love them a lot I speed a lot of time with them all. I hope you like my story time.
Sorry don't have photos of some of the pets
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Thursday 13 August 2020
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Kia ora Delilah,
ReplyDeleteIt's me your wonderful post police buddy. So far I've enjoyed reading about how many pets you have and their names, clearly you know what I say you could add but maybe get some adorable pet pictures to plop into your DLO for a bit more adorableness?
Although I'd also like to hear about what your favorite thing is about each individual pet or something involving their gender, color, backstory, age all that sorta stuff? Then I'd say that this blog-post is fabulous.
Otherwise Cute Blog-post,
Kind Regards, Nikita.
Hello Delilah,
ReplyDeleteIts Me Bridget From Your Class. I Like how you have tried something new. You have a lot of pets. Bella is so Cute!!! Maybe before you post you could check the capitals. What did you create the video on? But Other then that
Good Job.
Hey Delilah Its Renae you know me!!!
ReplyDeleteI Loved seeing all of your pets name, there names are adorable!!! (Especially PUFF PUFF)
This Story Time with you was amazing!
It was very interesting learning your pets name!, but I will probably forget them! (HEHE)
I loved how you put all of your pets name into a video and not a google slide lots of people use these day's!
To improve and make this blog amazing (even though it is amazing already) you can check your spelling and making sure you have some punctuation and capital letters are in the write place.
Overall It is amazing (LIKE YOU).
Which is your favorite animal?
Are they all your favorite?
Good Job.
Kind Regards
-Renae
My favorite animal is my kittens Gizmo and Chester, they are all my favorite animals.
DeleteKind regards Delilah
Hi Delilah! Kyah here from greymain school
ReplyDeleteWow you have alot of pets! I used to have 2 cats and 1 dog but one of my cats sadly passed.
My cat is called Tink. And My dog is called Bella
I really like how you showed all your animal names.
Maybe next time could you add photos for all of the pets or nearly instead of just one photo? And could you say about your pets instead of just their names?
Would you like any more pets? If so which ones?
Thank you for saying you pet names!
Keep up the good work Delilah!
-Kyah!